Today in class we made a time line for our Descriptive essay. Our descriptive essay is going to be about a video vlog that we picked on you tube and we need to describe everything we saw in the video to write the descriptive essay so we can This helped me layout the descriptive details needed for the descriptive essay. At the beginning of the time line we wrote minute one for the beginning of the video vlog and a part in the middle of the time line that said 3 mins, because the average times of the video vlogs are about 6 minutes. And then at the end of the time line we wrote 6 minutes or the end time of the video vlog. This timeline helped me with all the details and little information that was said in the video and at what time or sequence the action was done in. What also helped me was when I was watching the video I had a scratch sheet of paper that I tried to write down every detail and action that I saw at what time of the video and what happened. So by doing that I knew what was said at what time and what action was done at what time as well. So all I had to do was just review the video vlog several of times to see if there was any action, movement or anything said that I missed in the other times of me watching the video vlog. But I think that without the time line I would of maybe sequenced things the wrong way or would not have put the actions or things said in the correct order because the time line helped me see the video vlog for every minute of it. So I think that did help me out a lot and I don’t know if I would have thought of that workshop help on my own. So this was a great way for me to feel more confident about my descriptive essay and knowing that I put things in the right order.
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