BLOG 10! Reflect the Difference between Blog 3 and Etiquette Essay

The difference between Blog 3’s email and my etiquette essay is now with my etiquette essay I understand how to write a professional letter to my teacher. In Blog 3 I was writing to a friend about my bad grade so there was a total difference in the vocabulary and emotion. Another difference is in my Blog 3’s email to my friend I was of course rambling on how could the teacher be so unfair and that I was going to get in trouble with my mom and that the teacher would pick favorites, if I were to write an email like that to a professor they probably wouldn’t even want to read it. That was a very good tip that my teacher, Mrs.Crawford told me, that using emotion as reasons instead of facts isn’t going to convince anyone that you’re trying to talk to, it will most likely make them want to quit reading it. In my etiquette essay I was able to make my email longer by giving more details on to why I got the poor grade and what I can do to try and change it or to make it better, or at least and attempt that I am trying to get help in the topic that made me get that bad grade. As in Blog 3 I just stated all that I did to try and get that good grade but it didn’t work but I did not state anything that I can do to change the outcome. And in my etiquette essay I was being more positive on the outcome and stating that I am trying, and it would be a better outcome if given another chance to either re-take my final exam or if I could get a passing grade because of my effort.